Friday, October 21, 2011

The broken cellphone..

He used to smile my favourite smile
And speak to me all night long
When he would feel sleepy
I would sing him songs.

I wake him up in the morning
Singing a sweet tone in his ears
He would get irritated for a moment
And then look at me and smile.

I shy away and he grabs me
He will see the time and get shocked
He will get ready quickly
And will take me to his office.

I do not know if his work is done
But he always speaks to me there
He makes a quick check around
And quickly says 'I love you'.

The way he says it makes my day
I would feel full of life again
I realize again that life is because of him
And I wish this would continue forever.

But I was wrong!
I should have expected this to happen.
He got married and now
He does not need me.

He has thrown me to a corner
And my life is so empty
Now I only wake him and his wife everyday
With a sadness in the same tune.

He does not like the tune anymore
And never smiles at me.
It was too late when I realized that
I was just another cellphone.

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Prakhyath Rai said...

Too Good... Keep up the good work...

Jidhu Jose said...

nice Preethi, After long time.....

SUB said...

poor mobile...
nicely written...welcome back :)

Pritz said...

Prakhyath: thank u :) I am glad you liked it.

Jidhu: yeah after a long time :) thanks :)

Subrashis: :) :) thanks a lot :)

Deepak Bhakta said...

Nice One Pritz.... :)

Shobhit said...


Very nicely expressed. It's been so long since you wrote a post. Hoping to see more posts more often. :-)

SK said...

Very well narrated... Nice piece of work.... super like Pritz :)

LeoPaw said...

Gurl! you let your imagination fly.
That was simply great. Something different and really nice to read. I felt this post to be much deeper than it actually appears.

Pritz said...

Bhakthu: Thanks a lot :)

Shobhit: Thank you so much :) Yeah sure :)

Sumi: Really?! I am so glad you liked it so much. :)

LeoPaw: :) Thanks a lot. :) I did not expect such a nice comment. :) Thank u so much. Your compliments made my day :)

Seema said...

Really nice.good job dear.keep it up.

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