Sunday, May 13, 2012

The Moment You Told Me

Never had I ever dreamt about this,
I feel like I have worn rose glasses!
Life neva seemed so beautiful,
Everthing changed, the moment you told me..

I've changed so much myself,
I just cannot believe,
This tomboyish gal is now so girlish,
Feeling so beautiful like never before..

Every sun ray seems warmer,
Every flower look more beautiful,
Everyone looks so cheerful,
From the moment you told me..

When fallin in love or in your words,
Neva had I felt all this..
Neva had I thought
I would tell u all this..

I had thought in this new life,
I would lose my freedom.
But I'm feeling like a free bird
From the moment you told me..

We used to speak for hours together,

Topics used to pour in without knowledge..
Now like crazy we spend time in silence sighing
Without speaking a word over the line..

I used to come runnin to meet you travelling miles,
But now.. I'm nervous when I think
How to react when I meet you,
From the moment you told me..

Still I miss you badly ever moment,
And I always want to speak to you.
At times I wonder what is this feeling..
The feeling that is beyond love..

Had you not told me,
I would not have experienced this happiness..
I'm constantly on the seventh heaven,
From the moment you told me.. 

Images courtesy


KHOJ said...


Shobhit said...


This is simply wonderful ! And the pictures you chose to go with it are awesome. Well done ! :-)

Deepak Bhakta said...

Well described..
The moment is so special there will b no words to describe. But u did it so wonderfully. IMPRESSED!!!

Doubt: U were TOMBOY??? i don't think so :) ;) Talkative.. tats for sure :P

Nice work pritz...

Preethika Shenoy Padiyar said...

Thank you so much Shobhit... :) Glad you liked it..

Preethika Shenoy Padiyar said...

Thank you Bhakthu :) I am glad that you felt I could do justice to that wonderful and complicated feeling..:)

Yes I was tomboyish but u were not that close to me to figure out..

Jidhu Jose said...


Devidas S Maller said...

Superb ;) Waiting for sunil's reply :D

Preethika Shenoy Padiyar said...

Me too.. but when i had actually sent it to him in nov 2009, he had given me an amazing reply... So I have his first reaction... :)

Thank you Devi :) Glad you liked it...

Saru Singhal said...

First the pictures are too cute and your poem took me to those good old days when we could feel love. Very honest and lovely. I loved the way you concentrated on the phrase, 'the moment you told me.':)

Saru Singhal said...

I like the quote under your blog title...:)

Pritz said...

Aaah... my poems look so incomplete without your comment.. Thank you so much.. I am so happy you liked it :D

Sunil Padiyar said...

:) Well, do I need to say anything?

But seriously, this is my favorite poems of all that you have written so far.. FOR all the good reasons :) You know my first reaction.. so whatever I say, it can never better-off the first one :) Keep writing wifey.. or shall I say - keep surprising me ;)

Pritz said...

Me too :)

Pritz said...


roopz said...

Lovely...One of the best poems I had ever read :)

village girl

Pritz said...

Thank you so much Roopz, tats a great compliment.. :D


Sweet !

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